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Monday, 26 November 2007

  • Chapter 6: Story Time with Thentare

                After the funeral, Thentare went back to his home, thinking over what to do next. Dankalm had really given him some interesting things to think about. He did really think the quest was a good thing. They could get rid of Morwan, convert him, or something, but Morwan’s plans did not concern Thentare too much.

    Thentare decided he would talk with Dankalm one last time before deciding. That in mind, he headed to the tavern, telling Disinteyel he would be back in an hour, with a final decision on his going or not. He walked towards the tavern, still wearing his mourning clothes, thinking about his decision.

    Because of his preoccupation, he was not watching where he was going and so he collided with a neighbor’s child. Apologizing profusely, Thentare helped the child back up and brushed him off, asking, “Are you all right?”

    The child nodded, and rushed into the arms of its mother who had just exited the small house in which they lived. The mother hugged the small boy, and sent him inside to clean up the scrape he had acquired on his kneecap. Thentare turned to walk away, but the mother grabbed his arm.

    “Thentare, I just wanted to thank you so much for fighting last night. My husband as you know is prone to fits, and in all the excitement last night he got one. I cannot tell you how grateful I am to all the men who went out and defended our city and my children from those terrible men who attacked us. I hear you did quite well in battle. Please, don’t ever doubt that what you’re doing is useless or unappreciated.”

    She went inside, and Thentare smiled and waved. “Thank you!” he said, putting as much of the gratitude he felt into it as he could, and then continued on his way to the tavern. He arrived, and found Dankalm sitting in a corner, a hat over his eyes, snoozing. Thentare tapped him on the shoulder, and he awoke with a slight start.

    “Oh, sorry about that. It has been a long last few days, and I was sleepy. Have you decided yet? We leave tomorrow morning, with or without you.”

    Thentare nodded. “Well, as I left my house to come here, I was unsure of my decision. I was still not comfortable much at all with the idea of killing people on a regular basis. I wasn't sure if that's what Intholore wanted me to do with my life. Then, I met someone who thanked me for what I did. It was an honest, heartfelt gesture on her part, and I suddenly realized that you were right.

    “We are not fighting for us, for justice, judgment, or gain. We are fighting for those who can't, and they appreciate it. Of course, I debated whether or not I would be serving better here or out there, questing, but eventually I decided that my leaving will not only put me in a position to protect more people, but it will also push the ones I leave behind to improve themselves, thus balancing out any loss from my going away. The end result is that yes, I will come with you to the land of shadow, through the dark tunnels and into the lair of a dragon and the Nia Hunga.”

    Dankalm nodded. “Then so be it. Now, Thentare, I am curious. How much do you know of the artifact we go to seek?”

    “Well, it is the armor of Gartmalant. It consists of a breast plate, helmet, greaves, and a pair of custom weapons. According to most scholars, the weapons were basically a pair of sword blades attached to long, thin shields, that strapped to one's forearms. The shield extended past the elbow, but no longer than the arm, and had a handle to ensure you could hold on to it. There also were three stones, one in the breast plate, one in the right weapon, and one in the helmet. The one in the helmet was crystal blue, the one in the weapon was shimmering and black, and the one in the breastplate was bright red.”

    Dankalm raised one eyebrow, and nodded. “Very good. I am impressed. Few people know that much about its appearance. Now, what can you tell me about it's forging, and the circumstances of its use?”

    “It was forged one thousand, three hundred and thirty seven years ago. It was not made by one person, or even one race, but was a collaborative effort. The circumstances were that Jarizaux had landed with an enormous fleet with many men on board. He had conquered good parts of the coast, and after taking over the capital of men, he started invading the rest of the world. No one was safe from his armies. They invaded elf, dwarf, and man indiscriminately. The leaders of the three free people met together, and realized that acting as individual armies they would not succeed.

    “They allied themselves, and decided by vote that Gartmalant should lead, as he had the most success with the least resources during the war. So, to further cement the alliance, each race would forge a piece of his armor. The dwarfs, with their strong and yet light forging, put together the Breastplate, to ensure that it would protect from damage well. Men, with their knowledge of weapon crafting and specialty in the unusual, put together the two weapons. The elves, with their exquisite craftsmanship, put together the helmet and greaves. Each nation put in their most fitting stone.

    “The night before the first battle of the united forces and the armor, a wandering monk appeared. He prayed for the men, and insisted on seeing Gartmalant. The elfin king agreed, and received him in his tent. The priest entered, and told Gartmalant that he had good news, and bad news. Gartmalant asked him for the bad news first, so the priest sighed.

    “He told Garmalant, 'You have less than two weeks to live. I cannot say for sure how long it is, but it is less than two weeks'

    “Sighing, Gartmalant asked for the good news. The priest smiled. 'You will fight tomorrow, and you shall win! You shall beat back Jarizaux and establish a legacy of hope. One day, your armor will be a symbol of the victory of good over evil. However, there is only one condition to this. When all hope seems lost, you must stab the banner. More I cannot say.'

    “Gartmalant nodded his understanding, and the priest went his way. The next day, the battle was an even match. Gartmalant was unparalleled at strategy, and his armies teased, taunted, and destroyed the enemies all over the field, but they were against a horde of men unseen before. The Nia-Hungas were in full force on the battlefield, and Jarizaux himself was wreaking havoc with his dark powers. Gartmalant knew what he must do. He must destroy Jarizaux.

    “So, Gartmalant worked his way to the front where Jarizaux was decimating his men. Jarizaux saw him coming, and thinking he saw an easy way to defeat the morale of the elves, attacked with great relish. By this time, his magic was waning, so he used an enchanted blade, with an elongated black blade. Every time his blade clashed with anything, a puff of black flame appeared, giving his battles a very arcane and magical appearance. He and Gartmalant engaged in an epic duel that slowly captured the attention of the battlefield and caused them to stop fighting to watch the spectacle.

    “Gartmalant had the benefit of two weapons, and incredible speed and agility. Jarizaux though had great endurance, and brute strength. Finally, he managed to penetrate the defense of Gartmalant, and had his sword at Gartmalant's throat, a slit second away from beheading him. Gartmalant despaired, but at the last instant, he saw a banner nearby. He dropped to the ground and rolled, leaping up to stab the banner, which had upon it the silver hand which the symbol of the united army.

    “Gartmalant's weapon took on an unearthly glow, and Jarizaux turned to finish the fight. Making a split-second decision, Gartmalant shouted 'In the name of Intholore, begone violator!' and struck the ground with his sword.

    “Jarizaux was in the middle of another swing, but suddenly found himself thwarted as his blade shattered, its shrapnel falling into a shape like a hand. From each of the five fingers, a gout of purple flame spouted, striking Jarizaux in the chest. From the sky, five bolts of lightning struck from the blue sky, converging on Jarizaux's head. Five roots rose from the ground, and embedded themselves in Jarizaux's arms and legs. Jarizaux screamed, a high-pitched undulating scream, and then turned into a black mist that blew away in the sudden wind.

    “Jarizaux's armies put up a desperate fight, but it was downhill from there. They were eventually chased off the battlefield, leaving the free peoples victorious."

    Dankalm raised a hand, shaking his head. “That's incredible Thentare. Not only was that the most detailed recitation I've ever heard of that story, it seemed like I could actually see and hear the battle raging around me, and feel the tremors in the earth as the flame burst from the ground.”

    Odralin, who was sitting at a nearby table, nodded. “It was strange...I wasn't even paying that much attention at first, but then it was like I started hearing the swords clanging, men yelling, and see the smoke rising from the battlefield.”

    Thentare looked puzzled. “Well, I've always been a good story teller. I suspect I ought to go home and sleep and eat now though. After all, the impossible is not done on an empty stomach.”

Tuesday, 20 November 2007

  • Chapter 5: A pretty Sad Day

     (Ok, I know the title of the chapter is a bit silly, but I didn't feel like coming up with a better one. And if Thentare's reaction seems a bit...off to you, my apologies. It's hard writing an emotion you've never felt.)

    The next day dawned clear, a blue sky with a few scudding clouds to provide occasional shade. The church bell tolled solemnly, a mournful reminder of those who had been lost in the attack of last night. Scouts had reported the invaders were still fleeing, with no reinforcements in sight. Consequently, the wall watchers were at normal strength, and those who had watched through the night were resting. The families and friends of the victims were taking their more personal last farewells, until the late afternoon when the mass funeral service would occur.

    Thentare slept late, enjoying the decadence of the inactivity after the bone wearying of the late night and the battle. It had only lasted fifteen minutes, but they were an incredibly nerve wracking and physically tiring quarter of an hour. When he awoke, he stretched and donned his black formal outfit, remembering that today was a day of mourning for those lost. Especially, in his case, Dintlak.

    He wandered out of his room, tying on the vest, and found Disenteyel warming something over the fire.

    She smiled as he entered the room, and threw herself into his arms. “I have baked a cake for you Thentare, to serve both as a warming breakfast and a remembrance of the dead. I am so sorry about Dintlak.”

    Thentare nodded as he held her close, trying to absorb some of her cheer and good attitude. He stifled a sob, and said, “Thank you.”

    He held her for a moment more, than sighed and tried to smile. “See?” He said, “I feel better already! Now, I think that cake sounds like just the sort of thing I need right now. Is it warm enough yet?”

    Desinteyel nodded, and retrieved one of Thentare's hand carved plates from the kitchen for him to eat it off of. She lifted it onto the plate, and presented it to Thentare.

    “I thought you'd like this plate. It is the first one you carved, about a year ago, remember? Right after your first meeting with Dankalm.”

    Thentare gladly accepted the plate, and smiled as he remembered. “That's right. Using the tools I bought with the money from that man. It has a picture of Gartmalant defeating Jarizaux. Heh, and Gartmalant looks decidedly like me, a rather self-centered touch. Thank you sister.”He ate the cake, willing the sweetness of the cake to infuse him with some measure of peace and acceptance of his current circumstances. He suddenly realized what he had forgotten to do this entire time. Pray. He put down the cake, bowed his head, and clasped his hands.

    “Dear Intholore, creator of our universe, I thank you for giving me this day, and giving most of our men another day to live and enjoy your creation. I also ask that you would be with the families of those men that you did not choose to give another day also. I ask, Lord, that you would help them to turn to you for support as well as those around them, that they would see your hand, and ultimately feel closer to you from this experience. I ask that you would help me to accept your hand in my life, that I would see the good in this, or have the strength of character to accept that I cannot know. And, one more thing. I ask that you would help me deal with this guilt I have regarding those men that I sent to their destinies last night. The ones whom I robbed a new day from. In your name, Amen.”

    He straightened up and finished the cake, smiling as he did so. He felt better, and hugged Desinteyel again as he went out the door. He walked to the church, passing other mourners on the way. It was interesting seeing how the others reacted. Some were stoic, walking briskly and not showing any more than the minimum level of grief as was decorous. Some were clearly beyond caring about such things, and wept openly and hard into the shoulders of those near to them and into handkerchiefs.

    Others seemed to be of the brief but intense emotion types, walking by with tearstained faces, but with no more visible signs of grief. As Thentare passed the tavern, he met Dankalm coming out.

    “Thentare, my deepest sympathies go to you. I have lost several friends over the years, and I can't say that it ever gets much easier.” Dropping his voice, he moved a bit closer. “So, have you considered dropping out of the quest? Now that you know what it's really about?”

    Thentare looked around, and answered quietly, “I've considered it, yes. I am not sure though. I still agree fully with the sentiments that I expressed last night, about Jarizaux needing to learn that he is not all powerful and such. At the same time, I am not sure I can go on killing people, no matter how much they may or may not deserve it. Those people last night have weighed heavily on my conscience, Dankalm. They could well have been little more 'evil' than I am. I'm sure that not too many of them really enjoy their servitude, and many are probably forced to.”

    Dankalm held Thentare's shoulder, and looked him in the eye. “They may be 'forced' to do what they are doing, but that only means we are 'forced' to stop them. Just because they cannot help themselves does not excuse their hurting other people. Those people you killed last night, had you just let them do what they were 'forced' to do, could and would have inflicted more harm on your friends. And, possibly even your family. Now, I do not know about you, but to me that hardly sounds reasonable, much less acceptable. Remember, we are not fighting and killing to pass judgment. We are doing it to save lives, to prevent the bloodshed of the helpless, to defend our way of life against those that have no regard for it.”

    Thentare nodded. “That is true. Thank you for the new perspective, Dankalm. I will give my answer after the group funeral service this afternoon. By then, I should have figured it out. With Intholore’s help.”

    By this time, Thentare was almost at his destination. He walked the last hundred feet at an ever slowing rate, wondering how gruesome the body was. It was a silly thing to worry about now, but he needed to take his mind off the deep sweeping thoughts and worries that had been crowding his head. He entered the church, and made his way down the rows of men lying there, cleaned up and looking for the most part peaceful and rested. Near the end, he found Dintlak, laying with a bandage over half of his face.

    Someone had all ready left an orchid on him, as well as a bunch of wild lilies. Thentare took his hand, and pressed it to his forehead. A single tear rolled down his cheek, and he said in as even a voice as he could manage, “Farewell, friend. I praise Intholore that your soul was his, and am glad your death was without too much pain. I wish you were still around, to go on this quest. You would almost certainly be a better option than I would for the quest. Rest in peace.”

    The local priest approached Thentare, and waited behind him until he stood up and turned around. “Thentare, I have a bit of a puzzle on my hands, and I think you may be able to help explain.”

    Thentare asked, “What kind of puzzle? If it is a riddle, I won’t be of much use. I was never good at those.”

    The priest, Volguntayne, shook his head. “No, it’s something of a more mystery. You see, last night I was helping bring in the bodies, clean them up and arrange them like this. A dreary chore, but one that is rightfully mine. Anyway, I found one man that was very odd. He had been brought in by the soldiers, because he was not wearing armor, and in fact was dressed almost exactly like you do when hunting. He was part elven in appearance, and was armed with something that looks exactly like your bow, Thentare. It seemed like he came from our village. The only problem is no one has recognized him yet, not even Yoamipe or any of the other soldiers.”

    Thentare shrugged. “That is slightly puzzling, but if none of them recognized him I doubt I will. It is decidedly odd that he should have clothes and a bow like mine, but it is not like you could not duplicate my bow and clothes. I’ll see him if you want, but I don’t think I’ll be much help.”

    Volguntayne looked surprised. “If you don’t think you’ve seen him, how do you explain this?”

    He held up a letter, sealed with the symbol of the house of Huntaray and with “Thentare” written on it in sloppy runes. It had been soaked with blood, and consequently was very brown. Thentare took the letter, and looked at it. He did not recognize the handwriting, and could not think of anyone that knew him, could write, and would write him a letter if they could. As to the seal, he could not think of any members of the house of Huntaray at all. He did not even know of any.

    He took the letter and carefully broke the seal with his hunting knife, and unfolded the letter. On many of the portions of it, the words were indistinguishable due to the blood, but on the remainder another barrier to understanding, it appeared. It was in a language that Thentare had never seen before. Some parts of the lettering he could make out, and a few of the words almost seemed familiar, but it was not in the elvish he was familiar with.

    “Well,” he told Volguntayne, “I can make nothing of it. It almost seems a bit like elvish, but I cannot make it out. I’ll keep it, and look at him, but I’m as puzzled right now as you are.

    Shrugging, Volguntayne led Thentare back into a side room, one where usually the younger children met. A young man lay on a bed in the middle of the floor, and Thentare stopped in amazement. He was definitely part elf given his skin and eyebrows, but more surprising was that he looked a bit like Thentare had fifty years ago. Thentare examined his bow and was surprised to see that it was almost identical to his own. A small part of his mind started itching. It almost seemed as if he recognized him, or knew someone like him. He shrugged. He knew consciously that he had never met him, but could not shake the feeling that there was something very unnatural about this.

Friday, 09 November 2007

  • Chapter 4: More Unexpected Visitors

    (All right, this entry contains a few quotes, so I figured I'd explain that. This story, in it's original incarnation, needed to incorporate...five different plot elements suggested by fellow writers. A few of them included quoting various things...so I did.)

    Meanwhile, a few hundred feet away, the guard at the gate stayed at his post. He wished he could have joined everyone at the tavern, but he had a job to do, and he meant to do it! He took great pride in his diligence, and puffed out his chest a bit as he remembered his superior complimenting him on the way he handled the situation with Morwan.

    He looked out over the forest, sharp eyes searching for smoke, lights, or disturbed wildlife. Those were the three things his supervisor had always told him to look out for, especially the wildlife. Often the small creature's being disturbed were the only warning you would receive, if an invasion force was intelligent in their approach. He snapped out of his introspection as he noticed a lot of owls moving about restlessly, and other birds flying off. It looked an awful lot like something, or a lot of some ones, was heading their way. He ducked out of sight, and pulled on the emergency notification cord.

    Within minutes the town militia were rushing around, grabbing weapons and putting on the little armor they had. Thentare too dashed out, grabbing his bow and arrows along with his sword. He hoped he would not have to use the sword, but it was a possibility. He reached the north gate, where the call had come from, and found most of the village men all ready there.

    Dankalm had followed him, and the men milled around waiting for the captain, Yoamipe. He appeared shortly, the only one with a full suit of armor. He stood on top of the wall over the gate and looked over the men. He declaimed, “Ten years ago when I arrived here, I told you that you needed me to guard against a day when someone would attack you. You scoffed at the idea, and gave me this job out of the kindness of your hearts. Tonight, you shall see your kindness rewarded! And they shall see that this is no town full of undisciplined peasants, but a town of trained warriors. Companies one two and three, up on the walls! Company four, patrol the walls perimeter. Alert us to any distract and attack maneuvers they may try to pull on us! To battle!”

    The men charged to their allotted part of the defenses, Thentare heading up to the wall, with Morwan, Odralin, and Dankalm. Thoreklan led the patrolling unit, saying that he needed room to use his naginata well. Thentare asked Dankalm, “Would you please cover me on the hand to hand front? I'd like to use my bow as much as possible before switching to sword.”

    Dankalm nodded, and they took stations at the wall. They crouched down, taking shelter behind the part of the wall sticking above the walkway, and waited for the first sign of their attackers. It soon arrived in the form of a flight of arrows, thudding mostly into the woodwork of the stockade instead of the defenders as intended. The enemies then broke from the trees, and the defenders stood up and shouted back at them in a wordless display of aggression and defiance.

    They were being attacked by men very similar to the one that had attacked Thentare and Dankalm a year ago, with short swords and boiled leather armor. They had made a few makeshift ladders, but mainly seemed to have ropes with grappling hooks. There were a few arrows fired from the attackers, but their main thrust seemed to be in scaling the walls. They threw up the grappling hooks, and climbed up the ten foot wall with surprising speed, stabbing upwards as they climbed over the top to try and clear the wall of defenders.

    Thentare shot as rapidly as possible, hitting every target dead on. Dankalm defended him from would be short range attackers, while severing as many of the ascending ropes as possible. Within five minutes Thentare had exhausted his ammo, so he cast aside his bow and drew his sword. He took one last deep breath to calm himself, and then waded in, concentrating on improving himself instead of his doubts and fears.

    He deflected a stab to his left, spinning and elbowing the man in the face. Completing his spin, he smashed aside a direct overhead blow, bringing his sword around in a grinding circle before disengaging to attack with a low up-sweeping cut that changed directions at the last second, dodging the man's sword and striking his arm. The man screamed and swung frantically in a wide sweep, leaving him open and off his balance. Thentare stabbed at his chest, eliciting the reflex to jump back which threw the man off the wall onto his fellow attackers. Thentare turned to the side while bringing his sword down onto the sword of the next man up the rope, using the man's stabbing impetus to embed the sword tip in the woodwork. Thentare brought his sword up to throat level and sliced, killing the man.

    Thentare looked for someone else to fight, but was surprised to see the few remaining attackers, fleeing. They had not brought many men, probably expecting surprise to be on their side and untrained villagers to fight. The villagers had lost only a handful of men, their long hours spent training finally paying off.

    The village men cheered, and hurled warnings and imprecations at the fleeing invaders, laughing at the relative ease with which they were beaten off. The whole conflict had taken less than ten minutes.

    Yoamipe stood on the wall, over the gate with two sputtering torches silhouetting him against the night sky, his long sword raised in his right hand. “Brethren, tonight you have fought well. Wars may be fought with weapons, but they are won by men. It is the spirit of the men who follow and of the man who leads that gains that victory. Your spirit was as great as any army I have seen! But do not think that all victories will be as easy or as glorious.

    “Some day, you may have to fight more fierce men, or Nia-Hungas, trolls, or worse! You may be frightened, more frightened than you were tonight, or ever thought you could be! Some men are cowards but they fight the same as the brave men or they get the snot slammed out of them watching men fight who are just as scared as they are. The real hero is the man who fights even though he is scared. Like you did tonight!”

    The men cheered again, clapping and whooping in their exhilaration. Yoamipe held up both hands, joining in their celebration, then motioned for silence. “Men, you are tired. But we cannot abandon the defenses. Now, I want companies four and three to stand watch in turns tonight, as they were hit the least hard. The people not on guard will need to start cleaning up, taking the bodies of the men we lost to the church while casting the bodies of the foul pigs we slaughtered into a fire. Companies one and two, go rest! You will need to watch tomorrow. I will personally stay with the troops through the night. To everyone here, I am proud of you! Good job!"

    The men cheered one last time, then separated up to go home, stand watch, or sort through the dead. Thentare was in company one, and was about to head to bed when he suddenly wondered where Dintlak was. He was in company four, the one that had patrolled the walls. Seeing Thoreklan, Thentare went over and asked, “Do you know what happened to Dintlak? My friend, the other one that volunteered in the tavern. I don't see him.”

    Thoreklan sighed. “If you were, you would be facing your judgment. I am afraid he was struck by a stray arrow and killed, right at the beginning of the fight. He was your friend? I am very sorry then. He's at the church, along with the rest.”

Friday, 02 November 2007

  • In which certain truths are told

    (For those of you that missed it, I did indeed post pronunciation sound clips. Get high on life.)

    Thentare looked again at the stars, and smiled. He had heard that in the bigger cities, smoke and lights from below dimmed the stars. He was not sure he would ever want to trade the beautiful view of the stars for the excitement and rumored conveniences of the big cities. He took a deep breath of mostly fresh mountain air, taking in the mixed scents of woodsmoke, pine trees, and a few other harder to define smells. A few birds chirped in the trees, but for the most part the town and woods were silent.

    They arrived at their destination, and Thentare called out, “Desinteyel, I am home! And I have brought the elf I told you about, Dankalm! Remember, the one I met about a year ago while hunting that liger that nearly got me?”

    A female elf walked out from a back room as Dankalm started a bit. He smiled and bowed, taking in Desinteyel. She was a few inches shorter than Thentare which placed her at about five feet and eight inches tall. Her cheekbones were prominent and her ears pointed, meaning she was an elf. She also had silver hair with a strange alternating pattern of darker and lighter stripes, and powder blue eyes that beamed at him.

    “Greetings Dankalm. You honor our humble abode with your presence. I must thank you for the coins you let my brother have, they helped us through a tight spot.”

    Dankalm noticed a slight hesitancy in the way she said brother, and looked over at Thentare. To his surprise he realized that Thentare lacked the Elvin traits his sister did. Sitting sat down on the offered seat, Dankalm smiled. “You are most welcome, if a bit surprising.” Looking accusingly at Thentare, he continued, “You didn’t mention a sister!”

    Thentare flushed a bit and rubbed the toe of his boot on the floor. “It never came up. I haven’t exactly had the time to tell you much about me yet you know.”

    “That’s all right. I do expect to know more about you in the future though. Anyway, it was not a problem, Desinteyel. Your husband deserved it. His quick reflexes no doubt saved my life. I can’t believe I let that guy sneak up on me like that, I can usually detect even Nia-Hunga.”

    “That is something I've been meaning to ask, since Morwan mentioned their lair,” Thentare interjected. “What exactly are Nia-Hunga? Local myths and legends are contradictory and vague. The only thing I can figure out for sure is that they are evil, non-human, and that they serve Jarizaux.”

    Dankalm nodded. “Well, they have two forms. Their 'true' form is the much more intimidating one. It is like a reptilian wolf, except with somewhat human like hands instead of feet, and with a broader head, much larger teeth, and a nearly prehensile tail. When in that form, they can climb trees, run quite fast, and their teeth are poisoned.”

    Thentare shivered, and Desinteyel nodded. “Yes, thoroughly nasty creatures. If I could, I would exterminate every one of the beasts.”

    Dankalm raised an eyebrow at the quiet vehemence with which Desinteyel uttered the threat, and Thentare coughed a bit into his hand and said, “Indeed. How long have you been with the king, Dankalm?”

    Smiling a bit, Dankalm said, “I have been his messenger for the last seventy three years. It was only ten years ago though that I got the Yoomlagna, making me the one hundred and ninety fifth living recipient.”

    “An honor indeed, and a responsibility not to be taken lightly.” Desinteyel said. “Now, if you will excuse me, I am sure you two did not come here to talk only about your life stories. I am sleepy, so I will head to bed while you two talk about whatever it is that you must discuss. Goodnight Thentare, and goodnight Dankalm. May your business prosper, whatever it may be.”

    Waving to Thentare while smiling, Desinteyel went back to the room she had come from, leaving Thentare waving back at her and Dankalm sighing in relief and relaxing his posture. Thentare said, “So, what is the Nia-Hunga’s other, ‘false form?’ You said they had two, but only described one.”

    “Oh, right. Your sister distracted me. Well, their other form is a lot like a man, except that they have only four fingers, they still have the sharp teeth, and their eyes glow red. Now that we have that nicely out of the way, I did have something else I needed to say. Morwan is not all that he seems.”

    Nodding, Thentare replied. “So you hinted earlier. What exactly do you mean by that? Is he not a dwarf, not a famous adventurer, or not crimson bearded?”

    Dankalm smiled. “No, he is actually all of those. The thing he is not is on our side. He works for Jarizaux.”

    “What? But the dwarfs hate Jarizaux! He enslaved them for years and years, and forced them to build his defenses and renovate his castle! Why would Morwan want to work for him?”

    “We have our top intelligence officers working on that right now. So far, all we really know is that Morwan dropped out of sight for five years, and that he still truly hates Jarizaux. His motivations for serving him, or at the very least serving his interests, are still undiscovered. I suspect when we find out what he was doing for those five years, we will find why he does what he does.

    “His current game is fairly simple. He indeed starts out on the quest he outlined tonight at the tavern, taking four young heroes with him. They travel across the lands, doing mighty deeds. Then, when they near the borders of the lands of darkness, Morwan slips out of camp at night and brings the enemy to them, capturing them if possible and killing them if not. Either way, each time he makes his run four more heroes are lost to the free peoples. This marks his fifth run, and hopefully his last.”

    “Why do you travel with him?” Thentare asked. “It seems to me that the king would be unwilling to throw your life away, or risk it in such a manner. Why not just kill him or capture him for questioning?”

    “Because,” Dankalm said, “we are trying to see if we can figure out his motivation by accompanying him. At the very least, accompanying him means that we know where he is at all times, so he cannot sneak off again. I wish you had not volunteered for the mission. Your life is much more dangerous now. I only hope we can figure out why he is doing this before we get to the betrayal point. I am authorized to take him into custody should it get too close to that time, even if we have not figured out why he does this.”

    Thentare frowned. “Why are one dwarf’s motivations so important? I would think that the lives of our courageous, mighty heroes would be a bit more important to the king than why a dwarf is being evil. For all we know, it is a simple case of mind control, or that Morwan is just particularly greedy.”

    “Ours is not to reason why, ours is just to do or die. My superiors tell me the king wants this, and so I do it. Perhaps the king has some personal reason, or there may be a more subtle, hidden reason. It is useless to speculate because the end result is the same. Morwan must be watched, and eventually stopped.”

    “Agreed. What kind of contests will there be tomorrow, do you think?” Thentare was a bit worried as he thought about that. Dintlak was at least his equal in many ways, and his better in a few. Thentare knew he was better with the bow, but he had never been excellent with non-ranged weapons like the sword and axe. He was proficient, but needed more practice.

    “Well, I suppose there will be contests of archery, close combat, endurance, strength, and wits. Those things seem to be fairly typical, in the villages where contests are needed. To be honest, most often they are not. Usually he is lucky to get one volunteer, who then turns out to be sub par as regards weapons use and such.

    “Thoreklan was actually a lucky find. We were on the road when we heard a commotion. It was just me and Morwan at that point. Anyway, we found Thoreklan beset by five bandits wielding swords, axes, and a pike. We waited to see if he needed our assistance, but it became abundantly clear he did not. He disarmed two men, killed two more, and put the last one to flight in under five minutes. He stole all the money and supplies of the bandits, leaving the two men he had merely disarmed alone in the forest weaponless, foodless, and moneyless.

    Thentare winced. “Well, he sounds efficient, even if he is not overly merciful or kind. Where did you pick up Odralin?”

    “Oh, the kingdom he was dwelling in was on our way here. He joined a little over a week ago. He has apparently been waiting for an opportunity like this for years, as he has known Morwan for a while and jumped eagerly at the chance to come along.”

    “Is Odralin in on this plan? Or is he innocent?” Thentare got up and stretched as he asked, thinking that he would soon need to sleep.

    “As far as I can tell, Odralin remains ignorant of Morwan’s perfidy, and his current proclivity for killing the bright hope of the future generation. I don’t look forward to having to prove Morwan’s deception to him.”

Thursday, 25 October 2007

  • Chapter 2: Night Visitors

    (All right, soon I will post a sound clip of me pronouncing the important names. Am at work now, so can't.)


    It was a year later. A full moon hung in the sky over the mountains, shining down with its soft intensity on the trees blanketing the mountain. The rocky tips poking above the tree line bathed in the light, and the small village of Dagomathe basked in the pale beams. Thentare lay on his roof, gazing into the night as he thought back on the year that had elapsed since he met Dankalm. He had started a small wood carving business with the money he had taken from the man who had attacked Dankalm, and was doing fairly well.

    He mainly carved while on hunting trips, which meant his service was not fast but did mean that it was high quality, something few others in the village could say. He wondered as he stared off into the stars sprinkled across the black velvet of the sky whether Dankalm would ever return. And if he did, Thentare wondered if he would be being pursued again this time. He smiled a bit. He had not had so much excitement in one night since he had met him. Something perhaps to be glad for.

    He heard a loud voice shout from the north gate, “I will let everyone know then, you oafish guard! I have arrived!”

     Thentare cocked his head, his slightly pointed ears pointed towards the gate. The gruff voice continued, “Who am I, you may ask? I am Morwan Crimson beard, the most infamous Dwarven adventurer ever to set foot outside our lands. Now that everyone knows I am here, how about you let me in? If I were trying to destroy your city, I would not come and let everyone know I was here, now would I?”

    Thentare slid off his roof, dropping to the ground and rolling to absorb the impact. He grabbed the torch from beside his front door, quickly telling his sister Desinteyel he was leaving. He ran towards the north gate to see what the fuss was about, and joined a crowd of people with the same mission. Pushing his way through the crowd that had arrived at the gate, Thentare found the flustered gatekeeper consulting with the leader of the town’s defense, Yoamipe.

    “Well, he does not sound malevolent.” Yoamipe was saying. “There is no large army nearby he could be hiding, and if he thinks to conquer our city with merely the four of them…he is insane. All right, let him in. You did the right thing in consulting with me, we should not just let people in after dark.” Yoamipe helped his assistant unbar the gate, and swing them open.

    Everyone strained to see who would come through the gate, and cheered as a dwarf with a crimson beard and long brown hair swaggered into the city, waving to the gathered people. “Greetings, citizens of…this fine city! I have come to these mountains with the express intent of visiting you. Before I divulge the reason for the visit though, I will need some ale for lubrication! Where in this beautiful town of, um…”

    A voice called out dryly from the other side of the gate, “Dagomathe. The beautiful town of Dagomathe.”

    Morwan harrumphed and continued. “Yes, yes, of course. Where in this fine city of Dagomathe may I find some ale?”

    Most of the people laughed, and everyone started walking to the local tavern, calling “This way Morwan Crimson Beard! Or perhaps it should be Morwan empty head?”

    Morwan grumbled under his breath and followed them, allowing the others with him to come through the gate. First was a tall man, with red hair cut at shoulder length, intense green eyes and a dour expression on his face. He was of medium build, but had disproportionately large hands, one of which gripped the handle of his Naginata closely, and the other swung loosely at his side.

    Right behind the red haired one was another man who was shorter and stockier. He had an honest looking face, topped with black hair and framed by a small beard. His eyes were also brown, and they darted around actively, taking in everything as quickly as possible. He had a broad sword in his belt and a small round shield on his back.

    The next person through the gate was cloaked, and had the hood over his face. He stopped, and took off his hood, revealing Dankalm. Thentare started, and Dankalm winked.

    “I told you I would be back.” Dankalm said as he stretched a bit. “Though I had not quite anticipated these circumstances, I am here now nonetheless. Let’s go get some ale, shall we?”

    Thentare walked by Dankalm, heading for the tavern along with the rest of the men of the town. The women that had come out headed back to their homes, rolling their eyes and muttering about their menfolk.

    “So, I see you have picked up a few companions on the way, Dankalm. Would you mind introducing me to them?”

    Bowing, Thentare replied, “No, not at all. The tall red haired man is Thoreklan. I know not from where he hails, but we picked him up while traveling here, about a day’s journey east of Yontgarm. There is much bitterness and anger in him, but it serves him well. I have seen very few people wield a Naginata with his level of proficiency.

    “Odralin is the name of the other man, the black haired and brown eyed one. He is a personal friend of Morwan’s, and one of the many princes of Dartumeyal. And of course you already know a bit about our fearless leader, Morwan. He is indeed infamous, as he has been adventuring in and out of the dwarven lands for years, doing everything from playing practical jokes to rescuing maidens from rebels. I will tell you more about him later, let’s go hear what he has to say at the tavern.”

    They used Dankalm’s status as a member of Morwan’s party to push to the front of the crowd, and there found Morwan drinking a pint of their finest ale. He downed it, and put his mug down on the table with a loud clank, belching and wiping his beard with the back of his sleeve.

    “Well, friends, fine ale that is indeed.” Morwan began. “And now that I have my lubricant and your attention, I shall tell you the purpose of my visit. As I have told you, I am the most famous Dwarven adventurer. I have escaped imprisonment more time than I can count on my twelve fingers, and I have eluded capture more time than that. In my escapades I am used to breaking heads, hearts, and furniture.

    “But, one can only be satisfied with these small scale things for so long. Soon, one wants it to escalate! One wants to feel the rush of doing something on an national level. So, I decided I would scale up my operation. I decided I would try and steal something important to everyone! The sword and armor of Gartmalant.”

    The assembled locals all gasped, as Odralin basked in their attention and Thoreklan gave a small, wry smile that indicated he found their shock amusing.

    Morwan also grinned, and after drinking another swig of his ale, continued. “So, I have decided to go after the war trappings of the beloved first Elven king, who  was the only one to lead the free people's allied armies. Mighty as I may be, and foolhardy as I may be, I have enough sense not to go after this prize by myself. So, I have scoured the lands looking for men, elves, and dwarfs willing and worthy enough to come with me. Dwarfs were in short supply this time, but...”

    Morwan stopped to glare at the people snicker at his use of the word short with dwarfs, and after he was satisfied that everyone in the room was suitably chastened, he continued. “I have found three companions so far. Thoreklan, the tall red haired man of mystery. Odralin, with the less height and more dark hair, the tenth in line prince to the infamous throne of Dartumeyal. And Dankalm, fair elven messenger of the king and a distinguished member of the house of Thintis.

    “So, now you know our game, and our names. Are there any confident, brave, skilled and hardy warriors in our gathering tonight who would like to join us on our mission? We need one more, to make an even five.”

    Dintlak, Thentare's friend from childhood, raised his voice. “Well, it sounds fine enough, but what exactly is your plan for getting to the armor and sword? I hope you have one. Otherwise, this hardly seems like an advisable venture.”

    The crowd nodded, muttering among themselves, and then turned to Morwan expectantly.

    “Well, harrumph, of course I have a plan! I have studied a few ancient texts, and gotten some more new information, and have a rough outline on the defenses. First and foremost, there are the Naragamtorey, mountains which guard most of his kingdom. There are very few passes, and these Jarizaux guards with a jealousy that is only to be expected. The only other way in is either across a vicious river, from the sea, or through his gate. I think we can slip through a mountain pass, if we time it right and have a little luck.

    “After one has entered his land, one must then sneak across the forests and plains to his castle, which stands near the sea and rises over a hundred feet into the sky. It is naturally well guarded, but I believe an entry he would not think of exists. You see, because of its proximity to the sea, the castle possesses a no longer used drainage system that leads directly to the ocean. We can crawl up these to gain access to the lower layers.

    “Once in the lower layers, we must find our way through his Labyrinth so that we can make it to the inner sanctum. There, we must first get past a five headed dragon that always has at least two heads awake, and through the lair of his Nia-Hunga. Once past that, we will be there!”

    The gathered crowd sat slack jawed at the enormity of the undertaking. Dintlak, Thentare, and Morwan's companions were the only ones who retained their composure. Dintlak nodded slowly, looking reflective.

    “I like it. Enough planning so that we have direction, but vague enough planning so that we have leeway and do not have to panic because a part of the plan is contradicted. The quest sounds far from easy, but also far more exciting than anything going on here. I am in, if you think me worthy.”

    “Count me in!” Thentare raised his hand, clenching it in a fist. “For too long has Jarizaux sat comfortable on the throne he stole. I say it is time that we give him a wake up call!”

    Morwan clapped. “Fine speeches, and fine lads. I cannot really disqualify either of you just from looking at you, so tomorrow we will have a contest! Whichever of you performs better can accompany me. Now, let's have song and dancing!”

    The townspeople recovered from their shock and were only to glad to comply. A fiddle was brought, and soon a lively tune invited those that heard it to get to their feet and dance. Thentare was about to join in the fun when Dankalm tugged on his sleeve.

    “Would you mind if we went back to your house? We have some things to discuss.”

    Thentare shook his head, and the two of them slipped out the back, into the void that was as black as only a night in a small mountain town could be.